英语语法：133 When to Use a Comma with “Too”

Grammar Girl here.

Today guest-writer Bonnie Trenga is going to tell us how one little comma can change the meaning of a sentence.

Should we write, “He has the ball too” with no comma or “He has the ball, too”? Well, you can write the sentence either way. It’s up to you as the writer. A comma before the “too” gives the sentence just a slightly different meaning than the sentence without one.

The Difference a Comma Makes

The word “too” is an adverb that indicates “also” or “in addition.” It most often shows up in the middle or at the end of a sentence. Most of the time you probably won't use a comma with “too” because your sentences will be chugging along without needing a pause. So you could say, “I too like reading mysteries” or “I like reading mysteries too.” If, on the other hand, you want to emphasize an abrupt¹ change of thought (1), you do use commas, which, among other things, are used to indicate pauses: “I, too, like reading mysteries” or “I like reading mysteries, too.” In these sentences, you are adding a pause to create emphasis.

There is no right or wrong here. Comma or no comma after “too” is really up to you and the context of the paragraph where the “too” sentence is. If you want to emphasize your thought, you can add the comma to slow the sentence down. If no emphasis is necessary, then no comma is necessary.

Other Words and Commas

You might be faced with this comma conundrum² when using other short transitional adverbs, such as “therefore” and “however.” You could say something like, “He likes mustard. I however prefer ketchup³.” Here, you’re just stating a regular thought with no particular emphasis, so no commas. If you really want to contrast your preference and would like to indicate a clear break in thought, then it would be fine to use commas: “He likes mustard. I, however, prefer ketchup.”

Starting a Sentence with “Too” and Other Transitional Adverbs

When you use words like “also,” “in addition,” “however,” and “therefore” in the middle of a sentence, you as the writer get to decide if you want to set them off with commas. If you feel a pause is warranted, go ahead and use commas. When you start a sentence with one of these words, on the other hand, you need to use a comma right after the transitional adverb (2) because you’re definitely changing course.

Let’s look at the word “however,” which is often synonymous with “nevertheless.” If you were discussing the likes and dislikes of Squiggly and Aardvark, you might say, “Squiggly doesn’t care which Popsicle he gets. However, Aardvark really wants a cherry one.” Here, you’re making the contrast a big deal, so a comma is warranted. Note that sometimes “however” means “to whatever extent,” as in “However loud you can yell, I can yell louder.” In that case, you don’t use a comma.

So we’ve seen that you can start a sentence with “also,” “in addition,” “however,” and “therefore.” The word “too,” though, is a little different. It’s poor style, according to some (1, 3, 4), to start a sentence with “too” and a comma. It does sound odd to say something like, “Too, I like ketchup.” Too, I think that’s weird⁴ and I would counsel against saying or writing a sentence like that. It would be better to start the sentence with “moreover” or “furthermore” (4) plus a comma: “Moreover, I like ketchup.”

Summary

In summary, there are many times when you have to use a comma, for example when you are listing items in a series. But you get to choose whether you want a comma with your “too.”

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This podcast was written by Bonnie Trenga, author of The Curious Case of the Misplaced Modifier, who blogs at sentencesleuth.blogspot.com, and I'm Mignon Fogarty, the author of the paperback⁶ book Grammar Girl's Quick and Dirty Tips for Better Writing.

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1 abrupt   

adj.突然的，意外的；唐突的，鲁莽的

参考例句：

• The river takes an abrupt bend to the west.这河突然向西转弯。
• His abrupt reply hurt our feelings.他粗鲁的回答伤了我们的感情。

2 conundrum   

n.谜语；难题

参考例句：

• Let me give you some history about a conundrum.让我给你们一些关于谜题的历史。
• Scientists had focused on two explanations to solve this conundrum.科学家已锁定两种解释来解开这个难题。

3 ketchup   

n.蕃茄酱，蕃茄沙司

参考例句：

• There's a spot of ketchup on the tablecloth.桌布上有一点番茄酱的渍斑。
• Could I have some ketchup and napkins,please?请给我一些番茄酱和纸手巾？

4 weird   

adj.古怪的，离奇的；怪诞的，神秘而可怕的

参考例句：

• From his weird behaviour,he seems a bit of an oddity.从他不寻常的行为看来，他好像有点怪。
• His weird clothes really gas me.他的怪衣裳简直笑死人。

5 administrative   

adj.行政的，管理的

参考例句：

• The administrative burden must be lifted from local government.必须解除地方政府的行政负担。
• He regarded all these administrative details as beneath his notice.他认为行政管理上的这些琐事都不值一顾。

6 paperback   

n.平装本，简装本

参考例句：

• A paperback edition is now available at bookshops.平装本现在在书店可以买到。
• Many books that are out of print are reissued in paperback form.许多绝版的书籍又以平装本形式重新出现。