感悟人生-Unit 06 Four Words That Changed a Life 四个字改

Four Words that Changed a Life

"Are you too stupid to do anything right?''These words--said by a woman to a little boy who was evidently her son--were spoken because he had walked away from her.And they were said at a volume could hear.Chastised,the boy returned quietly to the woman's side,his eyes downcast.

Not a big moment,perhaps.Yet small moments sometimes last a very long time.And a few words--though they mean little at the time to the people who say them--can have enormous power."Are you too stupid to do anything right?'words like that can echo¹.

I recently hear a story from a man named Malcolm Dalkoff.He's 48.For the last 24 years he has been a professional writer,mostly in advertising².Here is what he told me:

As a boy in Rock Island,Illinois,Dalkoff was terribly insecure and shy.He had few friends and no selfconfidence,then one day in October 1965,his high-school English teacher,Ruth Brauch,gave the class an assignment.The students had been reading to Kill a Mockingbird.Now they were to write their own chapter that would follow the last chapter of the novel.

Dalkoff wrote his chapter and turned it in Today he cannot recall anything special about the chapter he wrote,or what grade Mrs.Brauch gave him.What he does remember--what he will never forget--are the four words Mrs.Brauch wrote in the margin³ of the ***** :"This is good writing.''

Four words.They changed his life.

"Until I read those words,I had no idea of who I was or what I was going to be,''he said."After reading her note,I went home and wrote a short story,something I had always dreamed of doing but never believed I could do.''

Over the rest of that year in school,he wrote many short srories and always brought them to school for Mrs.Brauch to evaluate .She was encouraging;tough and honest."She was just what I needed,''Dalkoff said.

He was named editor of his high-school news*****.His confidence grew;his horizons broadened;he started off on a sucessful,fulfilling life.Dalkoff was conviced that none of this would have happened had that woman not writen those four words in the margin of his *****.

For his 30th high-school reunion ,Dalkoff went back and visited Mrs.Brauch,who had retired⁴.He told her what her four words had done for him.He told her that because she had given him the confidence to be a writer,he had been able to pass that confidence on to the woman who would become his wife,who became a writer herself.He told Mrs.Brauch that a young woman in his office,who was working in the evenings toward a high-school-equivalency diploma,had come to him for advice and assistance.She respected him because he was a writer--that is why she returned to him.

Mrs.Brauch was especially moved by the story of helping⁵ the young woman."At that moment I thought we both realized that Mrs.Brauch had cast an incredibly long shadow,''he said.

"Are you too stupid to do anything right?''

"That is good writing.''

So few words.They can change everything.

1 echo   

n.回音，共鸣；vi.发出回声；vt.模仿，附和

参考例句：

• She shouted on the mountaintop and listened for the echo.她在山顶上大声喊着，然后聆听着回声。
• I should like to echo the words of the previous speaker.我想重复前面一位发言者的话。

2 advertising   

n.广告业；广告活动 a.广告的；广告业务的

参考例句：

• Can you give me any advice on getting into advertising? 你能指点我如何涉足广告业吗?
• The advertising campaign is aimed primarily at young people. 这个广告宣传运动主要是针对年轻人的。

3 margin   

n.页边空白；差额；余地，余裕；边，边缘

参考例句：

• We allowed a margin of 20 minutes in catching the train.我们有20分钟的余地赶火车。
• The village is situated at the margin of a forest.村子位于森林的边缘。

4 retired   

adj.隐退的，退休的，退役的

参考例句：

• The old man retired to the country for rest.这位老人下乡休息去了。
• Many retired people take up gardening as a hobby.许多退休的人都以从事园艺为嗜好。

5 helping   

n.食物的一份&adj.帮助人的，辅助的

参考例句：

• The poor children regularly pony up for a second helping of my hamburger. 那些可怜的孩子们总是要求我把我的汉堡包再给他们一份。
• By doing this, they may at times be helping to restore competition. 这样一来, 他在某些时候,有助于竞争的加强。