2008年6月四级焦点写作范文-2

 　　5、老师

　　directions: for this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic the most unforgettable teacher i ever know. you should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

　　1、我生活中最难忘的老师是……

　　2、为什么他（或她）令我难以忘怀，

　　3、结论。

　　in my life i have met a great many teachers who are really worth recalling. but perhaps the most unforgettable one i ever know is my english teacher.

　　what frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. first of all， he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening¹ of a passion for learning. he not only led us to an appreciation² of the beauty and perfection of english language and literature， but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. second， i was attracted by his lively wit. i remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness BECause his lecture were humorously delivered， never failing to provoke chuckles³ or loud laughs.

　　although it is nearly two years since i attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and i know part of him has already stayed in my heart.

　　6、求学信

　　directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for admission into a college or university. you should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in chinese:

　　1、 入学条件，

　　2、 学费和奖学金，

　　3、 住宿情况。

　　dear sir or madam,

　　i am a chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious⁴ university. my plan is to start my course next term, and i would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.

　　first， what qualifications do i need to follow a course of study at your university？ i already have a bachelor's degree from beijing university， but i wonder if there are any further academic requirements. second， how much are the tuition fees？ although i intend to be self-supporting， i would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. third， what is the situation regarding accommodation？

　　i look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed⁵ institution.

　　yours sincerely,

　　li ming

　　7、邀请信

　　directions: you want to invite some friends to a party. write an invitation letter to them individually:

　　1、邀请参加晚会，

　　2、说明举办晚会的原因，

　　3、将安排哪些活动。

　　dear snoopy,

　　i am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in mr. guo jing's wedding ceremony with ms. huang rong to be held at beijing grand hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on april 1， 2007.

　　as you are a close friend of us， we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. the occasion will start at seven o‘clock in the evening， with the showing of their wedding ceremony. this will be followed by a dinner party. at around ten， we will hold a small musical soiree， at which a band will perform some works by bach and strauss.

　　if you do not have any prior appointment on april 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.

　　yours sincerely,

　　li ming

1 awakening   

n.觉醒，醒悟 adj.觉醒中的；唤醒的

参考例句：

• the awakening of interest in the environment 对环境产生的兴趣
• People are gradually awakening to their rights. 人们正逐渐意识到自己的权利。

2 appreciation   

n.评价；欣赏；感谢；领会，理解；价格上涨

参考例句：

• I would like to express my appreciation and thanks to you all.我想对你们所有人表达我的感激和谢意。
• I'll be sending them a donation in appreciation of their help.我将送给他们一笔捐款以感谢他们的帮助。

3 chuckles   

轻声地笑( chuckle的名词复数 )

参考例句：

• Father always chuckles when he reads the funny papers. 父亲在读幽默报纸时总是低声发笑。
• [Chuckles] You thought he was being poisoned by hemlock? 你觉得他中的会是芹叶钩吻毒吗？

4 prestigious   

adj.有威望的，有声望的，受尊敬的

参考例句：

• The young man graduated from a prestigious university.这个年轻人毕业于一所名牌大学。
• You may even join a prestigious magazine as a contributing editor.甚至可能会加入一个知名杂志做编辑。

5 esteemed   

adj.受人尊敬的v.尊敬( esteem的过去式和过去分词 )；敬重；认为；以为

参考例句：

• The art of conversation is highly esteemed in France. 在法国十分尊重谈话技巧。 来自《简明英汉词典》
• He esteemed that he understood what I had said. 他认为已经听懂我说的意思了。 来自《简明英汉词典》