大学英语六级写作套用句型1

     高分作文标志1：四级120-150字;六级150—180字;2、是否长短句交叉;3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

    1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented¹ by the service industry like that. Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

    2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

    如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

    比如说：Other individuals, however, take the attitude that…3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge代替enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

    Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination² on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious³ classic music. That night I was sleepless⁴, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

    exceedingly替换verythrilling替换excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth.

    google替换searchan army of替换a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement⁵ of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!本文来源: 恒星英语学习网The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity替换more and more popularCoincident with…非常地道的词汇，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…Advancement替换developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm⁶ into )替换enter intoCurrent ( currently )替换nowAppeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth.

    Growing individuals替换more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

    For a start替换To begin withWe can, freely, search用了插入语的写作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换In addition / BesidesDeliver替换sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

    There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm toEmerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet⁷.

    No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sidesComputers do play，do强调Positive替换important / good等A slice of替换a part ofUnfavorable替换badImpacts替换effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入语Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage )Facet替换aspect各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!

    以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。

    1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing⁸ time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

    4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.

    注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

    Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,代替most.

    5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing8: shared代common9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.

    Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.

    Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

    12.little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly13..benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替very16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable⁹ ...代替necessary,inevitable17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.

    19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggesteive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear

1 implemented   

v.实现( implement的过去式和过去分词 )；执行；贯彻；使生效

参考例句：

• This agreement, if not implemented, is a mere scrap of paper. 这个协定如不执行只不过是一纸空文。 来自《现代汉英综合大词典》
• The economy is in danger of collapse unless far-reaching reforms are implemented. 如果不实施影响深远的改革，经济就面临崩溃的危险。 来自辞典例句

2 fascination   

n.令人着迷的事物，魅力，迷恋

参考例句：

• He had a deep fascination with all forms of transport.他对所有的运输工具都很着迷。
• His letters have been a source of fascination to a wide audience.广大观众一直迷恋于他的来信。

3 melodious   

adj.旋律美妙的，调子优美的，音乐性的

参考例句：

• She spoke in a quietly melodious voice.她说话轻声细语，嗓音甜美。
• Everybody was attracted by her melodious voice.大家都被她悦耳的声音吸引住了。

4 sleepless   

adj.不睡眠的，睡不著的，不休息的

参考例句：

• The situation gave her many sleepless nights.这种情况害她一连好多天睡不好觉。
• One evening I heard a tale that rendered me sleepless for nights.一天晚上，我听说了一个传闻，把我搞得一连几夜都不能入睡。

5 advancement   

n.前进，促进，提升

参考例句：

• His new contribution to the advancement of physiology was well appreciated.他对生理学发展的新贡献获得高度赞赏。
• The aim of a university should be the advancement of learning.大学的目标应是促进学术。

6 swarm   

n.(昆虫)等一大群；vi.成群飞舞；蜂拥而入

参考例句：

• There is a swarm of bees in the tree.这树上有一窝蜜蜂。
• A swarm of ants are moving busily.一群蚂蚁正在忙碌地搬家。

7 facet   

n.(问题等的)一个方面；(多面体的)面

参考例句：

• He has perfected himself in every facet of his job.他已使自己对工作的各个方面都得心应手。
• Every facet of college life is fascinating.大学生活的每个方面都令人兴奋。

8 killing   

n.巨额利润；突然赚大钱，发大财

参考例句：

• Investors are set to make a killing from the sell-off.投资者准备清仓以便大赚一笔。
• Last week my brother made a killing on Wall Street.上个周我兄弟在华尔街赚了一大笔。

9 inevitable   

adj.不可避免的，必然发生的

参考例句：

• Mary was wearing her inevitable large hat.玛丽戴着她总是戴的那顶大帽子。
• The defeat had inevitable consequences for British policy.战败对英国政策不可避免地产生了影响。