英语六级考试短文写作常见错误分析

     二、写作常见错误分析一、语法错误（一）句子结构错误1． 主从句叠置1) There are more and more students like to use the computer.

    2) There are still many problems should be noted¹ and resolved².

    2． 简单句叠置I like chatting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend.

    3． 从句叠置As is known³ to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life.

    4． 句子成分缺失If work hard, we will surely⁴ be successful.

    5． 语序错误1) Why college students spend more and more time on the computer?

    2) I often wonder where have they got their money.

    （二）动词错误1．时态错误Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future.

    2．语态错误1) I have excited several days at the news that you will come here.

    2) Most of the students satisfy⁵ with the service in the dining hall.

    3．单复数错误1) Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.

    2) Someone are afraid that computer may control men in the future.

    4．非谓语动词错误1) Let me to represent⁶ everyone to say “hello” to you.

    2) Do exercise in the morning is good for one’s health.

    3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.

    （三）代词错误1) We can use computers in doing everything you like.

    2) A college student should be able to do their washing on their own.

    （四）冠词错误1) Horse is an useful animal.

    2) The exam will be held in the December, 2004.

    （五）词性错误1) I wish you can consider my suggests.

    2) If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure⁷ sufferings and setbacks.

    二、用词错误1) Students must know how to apply a computer.

    2) People can touch many new things on the Internet.

    3) The purpose of this letter is to react⁸ some opinions on the service in the dining hall.

    三、表达习惯错误1) Why generated⁹ so large a change?

    2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer.

    3) A room often lives 6-8 students.

    4) I think this great change has three reasons.

    5) The prices of the food are too expensive.

    6) The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.

    四、标点符号及大小写错误1) However, every coin has two sides, I think the surroundings¹⁰ in our canteen are the best among all universities.

    2) The man was racing¹¹ down the street. Because he was late for the class.

    3) At last I want to let you know, I love our university very much.

    4) My favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis.

    The best English film in my eyes is《Forrest Gump》.

1 noted   

adj.著名的，知名的

参考例句：

• The local hotel is noted for its good table.当地的那家酒店以餐食精美而著称。
• Jim is noted for arriving late for work.吉姆上班迟到出了名。

2 resolved   

adj.下定决心的，断然的；坚决的；已解决的v.做决定，分解(resolve的过去式和过去分词)

参考例句：

• I was resolved not to see him. 我决意不见他。
• The union resolved to strike by 40 votes to 18. 工会以40票对18票通过决议举行罢工。 来自《简明英汉词典》

3 known   

adj.大家知道的；知名的，已知的

参考例句：

• He is a known artist.他是一个知名的艺术家。
• He is known both as a painter and as a statesman.他是知名的画家及政治家。

4 surely   

adv.确实地，无疑地；必定地，一定地

参考例句：

• It'should surely be possible for them to reach an agreement.想必他们可以达成协议。
• Surely we'll profit from your work.我们肯定会从你的工作中得到益处。

5 satisfy   

v.满意；满足

参考例句：

• Her father tried his best to satisfy her demands.她的父亲想尽一切办法来满足她的要求。
• She is too poor to satisfy her family's material needs.她太穷了，无法满足家人的物质需要。

6 represent   

vt.表现，表示；描绘，讲述；代表，象征；回忆；再赠送，再上演；vi.提出异议

参考例句：

• I'll represent to him the risk he is running.我要向他指出他所面临的险境。
• We selected her to represent us.我们选她作为我们的代表。

7 endure   

vt.忍受(痛苦、困难等)，耐住

参考例句：

• If other people can endure hardship,why can't I? 人家能吃苦，我就不能？
• You can only guess at what mental suffering they endure.你只能猜测他们忍受着多大的精神痛苦。

8 react   

vi.起反应，起作用；反抗，起反作用

参考例句：

• She didn't look up or react in any way.她既不抬头，也没有任何反应。
• How did he react to your suggestion?他如何对待你的建议？

9 generated   

a.生成的

参考例句：

• It is generated by some specified means. 这是由某些未加说明的方法产生的。
• It generated much excitement and frenetic activity. 这使人们非常激动并导致了狂热的行动。

10 surroundings   

n.周围的事物(或情况)，环境

参考例句：

• She is not very well tuned into her surroundings. 她不太适应周围的环境。
• The rich man lives in luxurious surroundings.这位富人生活在奢侈的环境中。

11 racing   

n.竞赛，赛马；adj.竞赛用的，赛马用的

参考例句：

• I was watching the racing on television last night.昨晚我在电视上看赛马。
• The two racing drivers fenced for a chance to gain the lead.两个赛车手伺机竞相领先。