2015大学英语六级写作常见错误分析(1)

 　　语法错误

　　(一)句子结构错误

　　1. 主从句叠置

　　1) There are more and more students who like to use the computer. / More and more students like to use the computer.

　　2) There are still many problems that should be noted¹ and resolved². / Many problems still should be noted and resolved.

　　2. 简单句叠置

　　I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much. I go to the net bar almost every weekend.

　　3. 从句叠置

　　It is known³ to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, computers play an important role in many fields of our life.

　　4. 句子成分缺失

　　If we work hard, we will surely⁴ be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.

　　5. 语序错误

　　1) Why do college students spend more and more time on the computer?

　　1) I often wonder where they have got their money.

　　(二)动词形式错误

　　1.时态错误

　　Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in the future.

　　2.语态形式错误

　　1) I have been excited several days at the news that you will come here.

　　2) Most of the students are satisfied⁵ with the service in the dining hall.

　　3.单复数形式错误

　　1) Wise men seek opportunities rather than wait for them. / A wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait for them.

　　2) Some people are afraid that computers may control men in the future.

　　4.非谓语动词形式错误

　　1) Let me say “hello” to you on behalf⁶ of everyone.

　　2) Doing exercise in the morning is good for one’s health.

　　3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, I find that the canteen service has changed a lot.

　　(三)代词错误

　　1) We can use computers in doing everything we like.

　　2) A college student should be able to do his washing on his own.

　　(四)冠词错误

　　1) A/The horse is a useful animal.

　　2) The exam will be held in December, 2004.

　　(五)词性错误

　　1) I wish you can consider my suggestions.

　　2) If a person wants to succeed, he must learn to endure⁷ sufferings and setbacks.

1 noted   

adj.著名的，知名的

参考例句：

• The local hotel is noted for its good table.当地的那家酒店以餐食精美而著称。
• Jim is noted for arriving late for work.吉姆上班迟到出了名。

2 resolved   

adj.下定决心的，断然的；坚决的；已解决的v.做决定，分解(resolve的过去式和过去分词)

参考例句：

• I was resolved not to see him. 我决意不见他。
• The union resolved to strike by 40 votes to 18. 工会以40票对18票通过决议举行罢工。 来自《简明英汉词典》

3 known   

adj.大家知道的；知名的，已知的

参考例句：

• He is a known artist.他是一个知名的艺术家。
• He is known both as a painter and as a statesman.他是知名的画家及政治家。

4 surely   

adv.确实地，无疑地；必定地，一定地

参考例句：

• It'should surely be possible for them to reach an agreement.想必他们可以达成协议。
• Surely we'll profit from your work.我们肯定会从你的工作中得到益处。

5 satisfied   

adj.满意的，满足的；清偿过的；确信的，毫无疑问的v.使满意( satisfy的过去式和过去分词)

参考例句：

• She's never satisfied with what she's got. 她对自己的所得从不感到满足。
• He had a self-satisfied smirk on his face. 他脸上挂着得意扬扬的笑容。

6 behalf   

n.利益，方面；支持，赞成

参考例句：

• Ken is not present,so I shall accept the prize on his behalf.肯没有出席，所以我将代表他领奖。
• They fixed on him to speak on their behalf.他们已经确定他作为代表发言。

7 endure   

vt.忍受(痛苦、困难等)，耐住

参考例句：

• If other people can endure hardship,why can't I? 人家能吃苦，我就不能？
• You can only guess at what mental suffering they endure.你只能猜测他们忍受着多大的精神痛苦。