09年12月四级作文预测及范文（05）

09年12月四级作文预测及范文（06）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the

topic Skipping Classes on College Campus¹. You should write at least 120 words, and

base your composition on the outline² (given in Chinese) below: 　
　　1)大学里逃课现象时有发生
　　2)分析学生逃课的原因
　　3)如何减少逃课现象
　　Skipping Classes on College Campus
行文思路
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因，

提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生逃课现象及主要表现;分析大学生逃课的主

要原因;说明应该如何减少逃课现象。
　　高分范文
　　Skipping Classes on College Campus
　　In colleges and universities, the phenomenon³ of students skipping classes is not

unusual. There are often some students who skip those classes for feeling

uncomfortable or other private reasons. [1]Besides, still some students are absent in

classes without any reason but for they don’t want to.
　　[2]There are two main reasons for college students skip classes. [1]First, [3]

compared with in middle school, students have more freedom in college. [4]It depends

more on one student’s consciousness⁴ [4]whether he will attend the class. So those

students lacking self-discipline begin to skip classes. [1]Second, some teachers’

classes could not attract students’ interests [5]so that some students [6]would

rather skip classes to study what they are interested in.
　　[7]For whatever reasons, skipping classes [8]does bring negative effects on

students’ study. [1]Therefore, [9]it is necessary to take some effective measures to

reduce this phenomenon. [1]On the one hand, the school and teachers should make

students realize the negative effects of skipping classes and increase their

consciousness of attending the class. [1]On the other hand, teachers have to improve

their teaching⁵ quality to attract students’ interests. [10]Only in this way can the

phenomenon of skipping classes be reduced as soon as possibly.
【亮点点评】
　　[1]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[2]用于引出原因。
　　[3]“和…相比”。
　　[4]it充当形式主语，whether从句是真正的主语。
　　[5]so that引导结果状语从句。
　　[6]“宁愿”。
　　[7]“不管什么原因”。
　　[8]强调谓语动词。
　　[9]用于引出解决办法。
　　[10]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。

 

1 campus   

n.大学校园，学校校园；大学　

参考例句：

• They spoke of the old days on the campus.他们谈起昔日的校园生活。
• The campus covers an area of twenty square kilometres.这个校园占地二十平方公里。

2 outline   

n.大纲，轮廓，概要，要点；v.描画轮廓，描述要点

参考例句：

• Make an outline before trying to write a composition.写作文之前先写个提纲。
• Draw an outline before you fill in the details.先画个轮廓，再画细部。

3 phenomenon   

n.现象，特殊的人，特殊的事物，奇迹

参考例句：

• Beethoven was a phenomenon among many musicians.贝多芬是众多的音乐家中的天才。
• How do you explain this phenomenon?这种现象怎样解释？

4 consciousness   

n.意识，觉悟，知觉

参考例句：

• The experience helped to change her social consciousness.这种经验有助于改变她的社会意识。
• He lost consciousness at the first whiff of ether.他一嗅到乙醚便失去了知觉。

5 teaching   

n.教学，执教，任教，讲授；(复数)教诲

参考例句：

• We all agree in adopting the new teaching method. 我们一致同意采取新的教学方法。
• He created a new system of teaching foreign languages.他创造了一种新的外语教学体系。