雅思写作中慎用的句式

 • 不要总以有生命的名词和人称代词开头（受汉语表达习惯的影响, to use I, People and We, 开头）；

• 不要千篇一律的使用主动语态；

• 不要总是用（如果）（因为）（当）等口语意味较重的句子，要注意使用书面语体的句子；

• 不要对动词过分依赖，要学会用动词名词化来表达；

• 不用总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句子表达肯定的意思；

• 恰当的使用排比句和平行句

• Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.

• We are making great efforts¹ to improve our English.

• If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior² to cars.

• If we only apply³ book knowledge, we will not get good results.

• The style. of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.

• Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.

• Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisement

1 efforts   

n.努力( effort的名词复数 )；气力；努力的结果；努力（或艰难尝试）的成果

参考例句：

• The company was very appreciative of my efforts. 公司对我的努力十分赞赏。
• His efforts to stem the tide of violent crime have been as effective as Canute's. 他遏制暴力犯罪增长的努力一直是螳臂当车。

2 superior   

n.上级，高手，上标；adj.上层的，上好的，出众的，高傲的

参考例句：

• This machine is superior in many respects to that.这台机器在很多方面比那台好。
• He acted in obedience to the orders of his superior.他是遵照他的上级指示行动的。

3 apply   

vt.应用，申请；涂；vt.使专心从事；vi.申请；有关联

参考例句：

• I want to apply for the job.我想申请这项工作。
• You may apply in person or by letter.你亲自或通信申请均可。