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 　　Writing 1 Task 1

　　You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write your answer in a word processing program on your computer.

　　The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.

　　Summarise¹ the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.

　　Write at least 150 words.

　　Club satisfaction survey table

　　Range of activities--------Very satisfied---------Satisfied---------Not satisfied

　　Ferrale members---------------35%----------------------35%-------------------30%

　　Male memebers----------------55%----------------------40%---------------------5%

　　Club facilities

　　Ferrale members---------------64%----------------------22%-------------------14%

　　Male members------------------63%----------------------27%-------------------10%

　　Opening hours

　　Female members---------------72%----------------------25%--------------------3%

　　Male members------------------44%----------------------19%-------------------37%

　　范文:

　　The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.

　　We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5% dissatisfied. In contrast, however, only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied. The genders² were more in agreement about the club facilities. Only 14% of women and 10% of men were unhappy with these, and the majority (64 and 63% respectively) were very positive. Finally, the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts. Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3% were unhappy, whereas nearly 40% of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.

　　Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.

1 summarise   

vt.概括，总结

参考例句：

• I will summarise what I have done.我将概述我所做的事情。
• Of course,no one article can summarise the complexities of china today.当然，没有哪一篇文章能概括出中国今日的复杂性。

2 genders   

n.性某些语言的（阳性、阴性和中性，不同的性有不同的词尾等）( gender的名词复数 )；性别；某些语言的（名词、代词和形容词）性的区分

参考例句：

• There are three genders in German: masculine, feminine and neuter. 德语中有叁性：阳性、阴性和中性。 来自辞典例句
• Japan was fourth among the genders of foreign students. 日本在二十个留美学生输送地中列第四位。 来自互联网