2015年1月29日雅思写作真题

 　　Task 1 diagram

　　The diagram describes the production of canned fruit.

　　分析：本月第三场考试，加试题目为流程图，步骤非常多，但不难理解，描述的是如何去制作罐头水果。感谢热心网友和同事提供的流程图。该图画的也不知道什么鬼，看起来像小苹果，那我们假装它就是apple好了：)

　　Task 1 diagram

　　The diagram describes the production of canned fruit.

　　分析：本月第三场考试，加试题目为流程图，步骤非常多，但不难理解，描述的是如何去制作罐头水果。感谢热心网友和同事提供的流程图。该图画的也不知道什么鬼，看起来像小苹果，那我们假装它就是apple好了：)

　　[生词讲解]

　　syrup¹: noun[U] a sweet liquid made from sugar and water, often used in cans of fruit 糖水罐头水果常用：pears in syrup糖水梨

　　有些同学说这个单词我也不认识，那希望大家以后遇到生词都能去查一下，其实星巴克的纸杯上就有哦。比如London Fog(拿铁)里，加了vanilla syrup

　　sterlise:verb[often passive] to kill the bacteria in sth给… 灭菌，给…消毒 to sterlise surgical² instruments 给外壳手术器械消毒sterlised milk/water

　　Word count:151

　　Sample Answer

　　The diagram illustrates³ how to produce canned fruit step by step.

　　It is clear that there are several main steps in this process, from the initial fresh apples to the final canned products.

　　At the first stage of this process,sweet and ripe apples are chosen and transported to the factory where apples are sorted by workers. Next, while some unsuitable apples are taken out at this stage, those qualified⁴ apples are cooled in a storageat 20℃. Following this, the cooled apples are sanitized under flowing water and weighed to ensure each apple to meet the standard.

　　After being peeled and divided into pieces, the apples are mixed with water, juice and syrup to improve the flavour. Then, the mixture is filled in the can and sterilized⁵ in the cooking stage. Finally, after the cooling step, the packaged cans are transported to local supermarkets and they are ready for sale.

　　分析：本文支持缺点大于优点这一观点。

　　缺点：1.去这些地方旅游会对原始环境造成破坏;2.一些国家可能会为了抢夺稀缺的资源，而发生冲突。

　　word count：265

　　Unknown natural is always brimming with seductive scenery. Plenty of researchers and travelers make trips to distant natural places, such as the Mount Qomolangma, Antarctica and the North Pole. I am of the opinion that this has more disadvantages than advantages.

　　Discover of new areas always bring some irreparable destruction. Before the South Pole is in the sight of public, it was once an uncharted territory. Since its discovery, hundreds of explorers and scientists had taken adventures to this wilderness⁶. At the same time, their scientific expedition may leave some geographical⁷ environment destruction there. And it is quite troublesome to make up such destruction.

　　Although travelers extremely enjoy the breathtaking natural landscape, they bring along tremendous risks. One of the most common phenomenon of travelers is producing pollution to local areas. As reported in many cases, holidaymakers have left behind tons of waste in the Antarctica over the last century. This will not only threaten the survival of many creatures, including endangered species such as penguins⁸ and seals, but also cause irreversible damage to the ecosystem⁹.

　　In addition, we cannot avoid the fact that untouched environments are scientifically proved to have considerable oil and gas reserves.Currently, the world fuel supply is running out in the next fifty years, and no countries will help themselves from the temptation of these fuel sources. The greed of people will drive them to drain out the resource in these regions, and by then places like the South Pole will be truly deserted¹⁰.

　　In conclusion, I confirm that travelling to virgin¹¹ land will bring far more losses than gains.

1 syrup   

n.糖浆，糖水

参考例句：

• I skimmed the foam from the boiling syrup.我撇去了煮沸糖浆上的泡沫。
• Tinned fruit usually has a lot of syrup with it.罐头水果通常都有许多糖浆。

2 surgical   

adj.外科的，外科医生的，手术上的

参考例句：

• He performs the surgical operations at the Red Cross Hospital.他在红十字会医院做外科手术。
• All surgical instruments must be sterilised before use.所有的外科手术器械在使用之前，必须消毒。

3 illustrates   

给…加插图( illustrate的第三人称单数 )； 说明； 表明； （用示例、图画等）说明

参考例句：

• This historical novel illustrates the breaking up of feudal society in microcosm. 这部历史小说是走向崩溃的封建社会的缩影。
• Alfred Adler, a famous doctor, had an experience which illustrates this. 阿尔弗莱德 - 阿德勒是一位著名的医生，他有过可以说明这点的经历。 来自中级百科部分

4 qualified   

adj.合格的，有资格的，胜任的，有限制的

参考例句：

• He is qualified as a complete man of letters.他有资格当真正的文学家。
• We must note that we still lack qualified specialists.我们必须看到我们还缺乏有资质的专家。

5 sterilized   

v.消毒( sterilize的过去式和过去分词 )；使无菌；使失去生育能力；使绝育

参考例句：

• My wife was sterilized after the birth of her fourth child. 我妻子生完第4个孩子后做了绝育手术。 来自辞典例句
• All surgical instruments must be sterilized before use. 所有的外科手术器械在使用之前，必须消毒。 来自辞典例句

6 wilderness   

n.杳无人烟的一片陆地、水等，荒漠

参考例句：

• She drove the herd of cattle through the wilderness.她赶着牛群穿过荒野。
• Education in the wilderness is not a matter of monetary means.荒凉地区的教育不是钱财问题。

7 geographical   

adj.地理的；地区(性)的

参考例句：

• The current survey will have a wider geographical spread.当前的调查将在更广泛的地域范围內进行。
• These birds have a wide geographical distribution.这些鸟的地理分布很广。

8 penguins   

n.企鹅( penguin的名词复数 )

参考例句：

• Why can penguins live in cold environment? 为什么企鹅能生活在寒冷的环境中？ 来自《简明英汉词典》
• Whales, seals, penguins, and turtles have flippers. 鲸、海豹，企鹅和海龟均有鳍形肢。 来自《现代英汉综合大词典》

9 ecosystem   

n.生态系统

参考例句：

• This destroyed the ecosystem of the island.这样破坏了岛上的生态系统。
• We all have an interest in maintaining the integrity of the ecosystem.维持生态系统的完整是我们共同的利益。

10 deserted   

adj.荒芜的，荒废的，无人的，被遗弃的

参考例句：

• The deserted village was filled with a deathly silence.这个荒废的村庄死一般的寂静。
• The enemy chieftain was opposed and deserted by his followers.敌人头目众叛亲离。

11 virgin   

n.处女，未婚女子；adj.未经使用的；未经开发的

参考例句：

• Have you ever been to a virgin forest?你去过原始森林吗？
• There are vast expanses of virgin land in the remote regions.在边远地区有大片大片未开垦的土地。