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GRE写作提纲如何又快又准的列出

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   gre从写作、阅读、数学等方面进行英语能力全面考核,出国留学网gre频道为大家提供了这几个方面的资料,希望对大家有所帮助。小编祝愿大家都能成为精通英语的gre烤鸭。

  写新GRE作文时很有技巧的,很重要的一步就是拟定GRE作文提纲。准备好一个GRE作文提纲对新GRE作文的意义在于熟悉了GRE作文题库,并且合理的对题目进行分析,总结出思路和素材的选用。下面就对GRE作文提纲进行解析,帮助考生们拟定属于自己的GRE作文提纲。
  "No matter what the situation, it is more harmful to compromise one's beliefs than to adhere to them."部分同意
  1、坚持信念可以走向成功
  Mary Curie adhere to her belief; Beethoven; helon KellerMarie Curie's belief-there must be some new matter with the feature of radioactive concealing1 in the industrial wastes-had enabled her to work arduously2 and tenaciously3, and eventually given birth to the discovery of Radium, whic h wan4 Marie Curie the Nobel Prize and meanwhile contributed significantly to the progress of medical science.
  2、不能盲目的坚持,如果我们坚持的东西是错误的话,否则必将走向失败;如:希特勒The most egregious5 example to illustrate6 this point involves Hitler, whose belief that the Jews presented potential harm to him and his countrymen was completely ridiculous and fantastic, which ultimately resulted in the tragic7 mass persecution8 and even genocide.
  3、有时,为了成功我们也需要暂时的妥协;如卧薪尝胆的故事,就是在力量弱的时候妥协争取生存和发展的机会,以期待日后的崛起long march of Chinese army
  GRE写作表达技巧介绍
  一篇高质量好的新GRE作文,很重要的一点就是逻辑明确。这其中需要考生们有自己的中心观点,有条理的阐述语言,以及层层递进的文章结构。所以GRE作文衔接问题对于表达逻辑的重点一方面在于GRE作文衔接上。下面就为大家从实例出发进行GRE作文解读,解读GRE写作技巧表达。
  我们首先来看下面这段话:
  Panda bear is a kind of docile9 lovely animal in the southwest of China. Its cherubic appearance and awkward movement appeals to not only children but also adults. It symbolizes10 the spirit of peace and harmony, which is cherished by Chinese people. Expansion of human activities to wild areas has caused a sharp decrease in the number of panda bears.
  这段话由四句组成,彼此之间存在着明显的联系,论证的都是中国大熊猫的情况。排除语法,文字优美等诸多考虑,这段话给人的感觉是四个孤立的句子,而不是一段文章。其原因之一,也被笔者认为是最重要的一个原因,是它缺乏必要的过渡(Transitions),文中主题之间缺乏有机联系导致文章缺乏必要的连贯性。这一问题也是学生在写作实践中普遍存在的现象。本文的目的就是介绍英文写作中transitions的使用。
  作为考试项目教师,出于通过考试的目的,注意在文章中必要的连接也显得尤其重要。在诸多北美考试的写作评分标准中,都出现过与之相关的要求,比如*"displays unity11, progression, and coherence12, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured" (iBT Independent Writing 3分评分标准)*"develops and organizes ideas satisfactorily but may notconnect them with transitions"(GRE Argument 4分评分标准)
  *"is limited in its organization or focus, or may demonstrate some lapses13 in coherence or progression of ideas" (Sat Write an Essay 3分评分标准)各种考试中不约而同的出现对于coherence,connection,transitions等概念的要求,而且这部分做的不到位都会影响考试写作部分的成绩,其重要性可见一斑。上面三个词的翻译为"连贯性","连接"和"过渡",而connection和transitions在这里可以被理解为同义词,笔者认为就是达到coherence这一目的的重要手段之一(还有一些其他方法,比如重述和首尾的呼应)。
  那么到底甚么是Transitions呢?在GRE考试中又被称作Transitional devices,连接元件。笔者尝试对之做出定义:Transitions是出现在文章中的一种词,短语甚至句子,其目的是用来表明它前后两部分之间的逻辑关系的,它的用处是能够帮助读者自然地从作者的一个idea转移到下一个idea,使用的结果可以使文章的逻辑性更强,更加连贯。打个比方来说,它很像道路上引导旅者的标志牌(They are like the road signs that guide travelers-College Writing Skills)。之所以说"前后两部分",是因为Transitions的前后可能是两个段落,两句话,甚至两个单词,它们彼此之间都会存在各种各样的逻辑关系,比如*Addition: and, in addition, additionally, one, another, first of all, secondly14, furthermore, moreover*Time: then, after, before, since, once, until, meanwhile, now, during*Space: next to, across, above, below, nearby*Change-of-direction: but, yet, however, otherwise, nevertheless, although, in contrast, on the contrary*Conclusion: because, so, therefore, as a result, consequently, thus, in summary, conclude其实还有很多其他关系,其他的词,这几种是比较常见的。我们发现这种transitions的出现方式非常多样,包含了很多词性:连词,介词,副词,动词等等,还有很多短语,所以把它称之为Transitional devices是非常恰当的。
  针对Transitional devices前后可以是段落,句子以及单词,我们分别举几个例子:
  *Among paragraphs:
  In the first place, human always like exploring the world around, especially mysterious fields……Besides human's curiosity, to explore dangerous fields draws them away from daily routine and boredom15.……Finally, although these dangerous activities may not bring us any material reward, they bring forth16 a lot of psychological benefits.……这是一篇托福作文的三个中间段的topic sentence,可以看出三段分别论证了人类参加危险运动的三条理由(好奇心,找刺激以及精神的愉悦),彼此之间的并列关系,是通过In the first place, Besides,Finally这三个Transitional devices来体现的

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1 concealing 0522a013e14e769c5852093b349fdc9d     
v.隐藏,隐瞒,遮住( conceal的现在分词 )
参考例句:
  • Despite his outward display of friendliness, I sensed he was concealing something. 尽管他表现得友善,我还是感觉到他有所隐瞒。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • SHE WAS BREAKING THE COMPACT, AND CONCEALING IT FROM HIM. 她违反了他们之间的约定,还把他蒙在鼓里。 来自英汉文学 - 三万元遗产
2 arduously f741a1d4f4ccf3a7e3243e32a3960cf7     
adv.费力地,严酷地
参考例句:
  • He arduously and soon began to play in local bands. 他拼命学习弹奏,很快就加入了当地的一个乐队。 来自互联网
  • It was borderline unorthodox and arduously time-consuming, but the Yankees could handle that given their reward. 这是很难以决定和艰钜的时刻,但是洋基队仍然能维持局面。 来自互联网
3 tenaciously lg3zdW     
坚持地
参考例句:
  • Though seriously ill, he still clings tenaciously to life. 他虽病得很重,但仍顽强地活下去。 来自辞典例句
  • It was apparently more tenaciously held to surface than fraction three. 它比级分三更顽强地保持在表面上。 来自辞典例句
4 wan np5yT     
(wide area network)广域网
参考例句:
  • The shared connection can be an Ethernet,wireless LAN,or wireless WAN connection.提供共享的网络连接可以是以太网、无线局域网或无线广域网。
5 egregious j8RyE     
adj.非常的,过分的
参考例句:
  • When it comes to blatant lies,there are none more egregious than budget figures.谈到公众谎言,没有比预算数字更令人震惊的。
  • What an egregious example was here!现摆着一个多么触目惊心的例子啊。
6 illustrate IaRxw     
v.举例说明,阐明;图解,加插图
参考例句:
  • The company's bank statements illustrate its success.这家公司的银行报表说明了它的成功。
  • This diagram will illustrate what I mean.这个图表可说明我的意思。
7 tragic inaw2     
adj.悲剧的,悲剧性的,悲惨的
参考例句:
  • The effect of the pollution on the beaches is absolutely tragic.污染海滩后果可悲。
  • Charles was a man doomed to tragic issues.查理是个注定不得善终的人。
8 persecution PAnyA     
n. 迫害,烦扰
参考例句:
  • He had fled from France at the time of the persecution. 他在大迫害时期逃离了法国。
  • Their persecution only serves to arouse the opposition of the people. 他们的迫害只激起人民对他们的反抗。
9 docile s8lyp     
adj.驯服的,易控制的,容易教的
参考例句:
  • Circus monkeys are trained to be very docile and obedient.马戏团的猴子训练得服服贴贴的。
  • He is a docile and well-behaved child.他是个温顺且彬彬有礼的孩子。
10 symbolizes 8a0610984df5bcb77bc12be9119bcd7d     
v.象征,作为…的象征( symbolize的第三人称单数 )
参考例句:
  • The use of light and dark symbolizes good and evil. 用光明与黑暗来象征善与恶。
  • She likes olive because It'symbolizes peace. 她喜欢橄榄色因为它象征着和平。 来自《简明英汉词典》
11 unity 4kQwT     
n.团结,联合,统一;和睦,协调
参考例句:
  • When we speak of unity,we do not mean unprincipled peace.所谓团结,并非一团和气。
  • We must strengthen our unity in the face of powerful enemies.大敌当前,我们必须加强团结。
12 coherence jWGy3     
n.紧凑;连贯;一致性
参考例句:
  • There was no coherence between the first and the second half of the film.这部电影的前半部和后半部没有连贯性。
  • Environmental education is intended to give these topics more coherence.环境教育的目的是使这些课题更加息息相关。
13 lapses 43ecf1ab71734d38301e2287a6e458dc     
n.失误,过失( lapse的名词复数 );小毛病;行为失检;偏离正道v.退步( lapse的第三人称单数 );陷入;倒退;丧失
参考例句:
  • He sometimes lapses from good behavior. 他有时行为失检。 来自辞典例句
  • He could forgive attacks of nerves, panic, bad unexplainable actions, all sorts of lapses. 他可以宽恕突然发作的歇斯底里,惊慌失措,恶劣的莫名其妙的动作,各种各样的失误。 来自辞典例句
14 secondly cjazXx     
adv.第二,其次
参考例句:
  • Secondly,use your own head and present your point of view.第二,动脑筋提出自己的见解。
  • Secondly it is necessary to define the applied load.其次,需要确定所作用的载荷。
15 boredom ynByy     
n.厌烦,厌倦,乏味,无聊
参考例句:
  • Unemployment can drive you mad with boredom.失业会让你无聊得发疯。
  • A walkman can relieve the boredom of running.跑步时带着随身听就不那么乏味了。
16 forth Hzdz2     
adv.向前;向外,往外
参考例句:
  • The wind moved the trees gently back and forth.风吹得树轻轻地来回摇晃。
  • He gave forth a series of works in rapid succession.他很快连续发表了一系列的作品。