雅思高分作文的10大特征(在线收听) |
① 淡化模板痕迹:避免使用cliché(陈词滥调):不要上来就写every coin has two sides(=There is no garden without weeds). / as it is widely accepted / as we all know (=it is as clear as crystal that)括号里的表达法推荐使用。 ② 大量的使用了形式主语和灵活句式(倒装,强调):
例如
It must be stressed out that 必须强调指出
It is fairly difficult to say that (反驳)
It is not completely true to say that (让步反驳)
It is conceivable that 可以想象
③ 首段一般是:1)改写题目,介绍文章背景;2)提出争议焦点;3)明确表明作家的观点
④ 1)再解释2)举例子3)反证法是展开分论点的三个重要的方法
1). 再解释:In other words ;To be more specific=specifically ;That is to say (也就是说)
2). 举例子:To illustrate(举例说明) ;A case in point is that ;An obvious example is that
3). 反证法:While ;Conversely(相反) ;On the contrary (相反)
⑤ 有3-5(5-8)个亮点的词汇或是短语
Optimize 使得最优化= improve
Gorgeous 美丽的 = beautiful
Maximize 使最大化= Multiply
⑥ 一般的思路是1)客观平衡写 2)让步支持或是让步反驳 3)分析问题解决问题,并且在尾段明确提出观点,也可以提出建议。
⑦ 以第一人称的口吻My view is that /As I see it /From my perspective (如果题目指令中有要求,最好是第一人称口吻论述)
⑧ 用到which / who 引导的定语从句
⑨ 英语的思维是主句在前,条件在后If / as long as / on the condition that (以---为条件)
⑩ 字迹工整,250字以上 |
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