谈论工作 2

A:Would you mind reading this letter of application I've written? I'd like to have your opinion. If you don't think it's any good, please let me know. I really want this job.

A：请你把我写的这封求职信看一看好吗？我想听听你的意见。如果写得不好，就告诉我。我的确想得到这份工作。

B:Well, most of it seems fine. But if I were you, I'd change the beginning. You should start by saying why you want this job.

B：嗯，大部分内容似乎还不错。但是假如我要是你的话，我会把开头变一变的。开始你应该写你为什么要得到这份工作。

A:Oh, right. Good idea.

A：噢，对。好主意。

B:And the second part is too short. You should include a lot more information about your education and work experience.

B：第二部分太短。你应该多介绍一些你的教育状况和工作经历。

A:Okay, thanks! I really appreciate your help.

A：好，谢谢。万分感激你对我的帮助。