一、第三段开头可以用到的过渡句：

　　What should we do to release/fix the problem?

　　Are there any recommendations to solve the problem?

　　How to cure the pressing situation?

　　What should we do at present?

　　+The answer is that all hands are required to (solve the pressing problem/improve the situation.

　　二、负向文章行文思路：

　　1、社会层面

　　(1)中央地方共同努力

　　The local officials should resort to the law to regulate ( environmental conservation ) . Besides, the central government is not supposed to hand a blank check to the local and should be partially involved in (curbing the local tainted environment).

　　state government

　　(2)政府立法听民意

　　Our government should resort to the law to regulate ( the standard of product quality ) and shall listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (quality of product)

　　food security/safety

　　(3)政府直面问题，听民意，平衡两者关系

　　Our government should not sugarcoat(cover) the problem but listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (09-网络远近the Internet) and

　　try to juggle ( the use of network and the supervision on it/ control over it )

　　try to balance between (the use of network and the control over it)

　　juggle A and B

　　unfavorable information

　　balance between A and B

　　(4)学校提供相关教育

　　Our colleges are supposed to provide training and course for students to learn how to juggle (03溺爱孩子their physical development and psychological maturity/ 13选择 their study at school and internship outside the campus/off campus) on campus

　　(5)学校组织

　　Student Union should start/kick off campaign, both inside and outside the campus(both on and off campus), to educate people that ( 06追星--chasing idol during the youth should be properly handled by their parents. )

　　(6)媒体

　　Media can broadcast less commercials and more public service advertisements

　　to call on parents to ( 03溺爱parent their children properly )

　　to promote the awareness of (03溺爱 right parenting )

　　2、个人层面

　　(1)有问题找家长和辅导员

　　Our young generation should turn to our student supervisors and parents for recommendations about

　　how to (balance between internship and academy for their future career.)

　　how to promote their awareness of ( )

　　how to strengthen their belief that ( )

　　(2)积极投入活动

　　We should take part into the campaign to promote the awareness of ( ) and fulfill our accountability as a member of our community.

　　(3)啥都做

　　No matter how much fund that our government would put into (the recovery of tainted region), we will never see (a clean sky or breath fresh air) if effort of the young generation were absent. Although not financially independent, our college students must be doing everything we can to fulfill our duty to take part into the improvement of our community.

　　3、负向文章行文思路结尾：

　　With efforts from all walks of life, it is certain that the situation would get improved soon.

　　三、正向文章行文思路 (积极倡导)：

　　( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to ( foster people’s confidence ).

　　1、社会层面

　　(1)媒体传递正能量media

　　The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.

　　(2)教育education

　　Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood. Specifically，self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.

　　(3)学校college

　　College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.

　　curriculum 校内课程

　　extra curriculum课外活动

　　electives n选修课 elective curriculums

　　2、个人层面

　　(1)改善自我

　　①Reading books. We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of reading books. You will find what you can not get in reality but in books, such as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette as well as mental power etc.

　　such as +N/doing

　　for example,+句子

　　②Exercising. Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would improve your mentality, personality and strengthen your weak point. Your will find yourself more assertive and decisive after one year of group exercising.

　　find oneself +adj

　　find oneself +doing sth

　　③+给予他们时间成长Of course, we can not grow to be (a confident person) overnight if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn it.

　　(2)志愿工作voluntary work

　　It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work. During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness boosted, and social responsibilities strengthened. You would like to join hands with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.

　　get sth done

　　3、正向文章行文思路结尾：

　　I am determined to say that effort and devotion from all hands would promise a prosperous and harmonious society.

　　I am sure that effort and devotion from all walks of life would ensure that our society make a rapid strides in near future.