09年12月四级作文预测及范文（04）（在线收听）

09年12月四级作文预测及范文（04）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the

topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and

base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动
　　2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处
　　3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么
　　Social Practice of College Students 
范文思路：
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处

，提纲第3点要求指出注意事项，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：概述大学生社会实践活动及其主要内容;分析社会实践

活动给大学生带来的好处;指出大学生参加社会实践应该注意些什么。
　　高分范文
　　Social Practice of College Students
　　Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social

practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the

volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It

’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s

college education.
　　[2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice.

[4]Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world

outside the campus. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply

their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills

are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students’ sense

of social responsibility.
　　[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students

to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some

problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so

as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship

between social practice and study.
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]平行结构。alike意为“类似的”，作后置定语。
　　[2]“毫无疑问”，副词使用恰当。
　　[3]“从…中受益很多”。
　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[5]“把知识运用到解决实际问题中”。
　　[6]“加强社会责任感”。
　　[7]用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。
　　[8]“平衡…之间的关系”。