考研英语一作文第三段及结尾的具体写作框架

 　　第三段与结尾部分是整篇文章的总结部分，对于整体来说有点睛和提分的作用。本文提供的框架也分为负向文章行文思路与正向文章行文思路两大类，第三段的总结与提升主要从两个层面(社会层面与个人层面)来分析。

　　一、第三段开头可以用到的过渡句：

　　What should we do to release/fix the problem?

　　Are there any recommendations to solve the problem?

　　How to cure the pressing situation?

　　What should we do at present?

　　+The answer is that all hands are required to (solve the pressing problem/improve the situation.

　　二、负向文章行文思路：

　　1、社会层面

　　(1)中央地方共同努力

　　The local officials should resort to the law to regulate ( environmental conservation ) . Besides, the central government is not supposed to hand a blank check to the local and should be partially¹ involved in (curbing the local tainted² environment).

　　state government

　　(2)政府立法听民意

　　Our government should resort to the law to regulate ( the standard of product quality ) and shall listen to public opinions and demands when formulating³ laws, regulations and policies relating to (quality of product)

　　food security/safety

　　(3)政府直面问题，听民意，平衡两者关系

　　Our government should not sugarcoat(cover) the problem but listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (09-网络远近the Internet) and

　　try to juggle⁴ ( the use of network and the supervision⁵ on it/ control over it )

　　try to balance between (the use of network and the control over it)

　　juggle A and B

　　unfavorable information

　　balance between A and B

　　(4)学校提供相关教育

　　Our colleges are supposed to provide training and course for students to learn how to juggle (03溺爱孩子their physical development and psychological maturity/ 13选择 their study at school and internship⁶ outside the campus/off campus) on campus

　　(5)学校组织

　　Student Union should start/kick off campaign, both inside and outside the campus(both on and off campus), to educate people that ( 06追星--chasing idol⁷ during the youth should be properly handled by their parents. )

　　(6)媒体

　　Media can broadcast less commercials and more public service advertisements

　　to call on parents to ( 03溺爱parent their children properly )

　　to promote the awareness⁸ of (03溺爱 right parenting )

　　2、个人层面

　　(1)有问题找家长和辅导员

　　Our young generation should turn to our student supervisors⁹ and parents for recommendations about

　　how to (balance between internship and academy for their future career.)

　　how to promote their awareness of ( )

　　how to strengthen their belief that ( )

　　(2)积极投入活动

　　We should take part into the campaign to promote the awareness of ( ) and fulfill¹⁰ our accountability as a member of our community.

　　(3)啥都做

　　No matter how much fund that our government would put into (the recovery of tainted region), we will never see (a clean sky or breath fresh air) if effort of the young generation were absent. Although not financially independent, our college students must be doing everything we can to fulfill our duty to take part into the improvement of our community.

　　3、负向文章行文思路结尾：

　　With efforts from all walks of life, it is certain that the situation would get improved soon.

　　三、正向文章行文思路 (积极倡导)：

　　( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to ( foster people’s confidence ).

　　1、社会层面

　　(1)媒体传递正能量media

　　The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively¹¹ to difficulties and adversities.

　　(2)教育education

　　Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles¹² and kids before they enter their adulthood¹³. Specifically，self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.

　　(3)学校college

　　College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.

　　curriculum 校内课程

　　extra curriculum课外活动

　　electives n选修课 elective curriculums

　　2、个人层面

　　(1)改善自我

　　①Reading books. We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of reading books. You will find what you can not get in reality but in books, such as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette¹⁴ as well as mental power etc.

　　such as +N/doing

　　for example,+句子

　　②Exercising. Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would improve your mentality¹⁵, personality and strengthen your weak point. Your will find yourself more assertive¹⁶ and decisive after one year of group exercising.

　　find oneself +adj

　　find oneself +doing sth

　　③+给予他们时间成长Of course, we can not grow to be (a confident person) overnight if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn it.

　　(2)志愿工作voluntary work

　　It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work. During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness boosted, and social responsibilities strengthened. You would like to join hands with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.

　　get sth done

　　3、正向文章行文思路结尾：

　　I am determined¹⁷ to say that effort and devotion from all hands would promise a prosperous and harmonious¹⁸ society.

　　I am sure that effort and devotion from all walks of life would ensure that our society make a rapid strides in near future.

1 partially   

adv.部分地，从某些方面讲

参考例句：

• The door was partially concealed by the drapes.门有一部分被门帘遮住了。
• The police managed to restore calm and the curfew was partially lifted.警方设法恢复了平静，宵禁部分解除。

2 tainted   

adj.腐坏的；污染的；沾污的；感染的v.使变质( taint的过去式和过去分词 )；使污染；败坏；被污染，腐坏，败坏

参考例句：

• The administration was tainted with scandal. 丑闻使得政府声名狼藉。
• He was considered tainted by association with the corrupt regime. 他因与腐败政府有牵连而名誉受损。 来自《简明英汉词典》

3 formulating   

v.构想出( formulate的现在分词 )；规划；确切地阐述；用公式表示

参考例句：

• At present, the Chinese government is formulating nationwide regulations on the control of such chemicals. 目前，中国政府正在制定全国性的易制毒化学品管理条例。 来自汉英非文学 - 白皮书
• Because of this, the U.S. has taken further steps in formulating the \"Magellan\" programme. 为此，美国又进一步制定了“麦哲伦”计划。 来自百科语句

4 juggle   

v.变戏法，纂改，欺骗，同时做；n.玩杂耍，纂改，花招

参考例句：

• If you juggle with your accounts,you'll get into trouble.你要是在帐目上做手脚，你可要遇到麻烦了。
• She had to juggle her job and her children.她得同时兼顾工作和孩子。

5 supervision   

n.监督，管理

参考例句：

• The work was done under my supervision.这项工作是在我的监督之下完成的。
• The old man's will was executed under the personal supervision of the lawyer.老人的遗嘱是在律师的亲自监督下执行的。

6 internship   

n.实习医师，实习医师期

参考例句：

• an internship at a television station 在电视台的实习期
• a summer internship with a small stipend 薪水微薄的暑期实习

7 idol   

n.偶像，红人，宠儿

参考例句：

• As an only child he was the idol of his parents.作为独子，他是父母的宠儿。
• Blind worship of this idol must be ended.对这个偶像的盲目崇拜应该结束了。

8 awareness   

n.意识，觉悟，懂事，明智

参考例句：

• There is a general awareness that smoking is harmful.人们普遍认识到吸烟有害健康。
• Environmental awareness has increased over the years.这些年来人们的环境意识增强了。

9 supervisors   

n.监督者，管理者( supervisor的名词复数 )

参考例句：

• I think the best technical people make the best supervisors. 我认为最好的技术人员可以成为最好的管理人员。 来自辞典例句
• Even the foremen or first-level supervisors have a staffing responsibility. 甚至领班或第一线的监督人员也有任用的责任。 来自辞典例句

10 fulfill   

vt.履行，实现，完成；满足，使满意

参考例句：

• If you make a promise you should fulfill it.如果你许诺了，你就要履行你的诺言。
• This company should be able to fulfill our requirements.这家公司应该能够满足我们的要求。

11 positively   

adv.明确地，断然，坚决地；实在，确实

参考例句：

• She was positively glowing with happiness.她满脸幸福。
• The weather was positively poisonous.这天气着实讨厌。

12 juveniles   

n.青少年( juvenile的名词复数 )；扮演少年角色的演员；未成年人

参考例句：

• Do you think that punishment for violent crimes should be the same for juveniles and adults? 你对暴力犯罪的惩罚对于青少年和成人应一样吗？ 来自生活英语口语25天快训
• Juveniles Should we not exactly in need of such strength and conviction? 少年的我们难道不正是需要这种力量和信念吗？ 来自互联网

13 adulthood   

n.成年，成人期

参考例句：

• Some infantile actions survive into adulthood.某些婴儿期的行为一直保持到成年期。
• Few people nowadays are able to maintain friendships into adulthood.如今很少有人能将友谊维持到成年。

14 etiquette   

n.礼仪，礼节；规矩

参考例句：

• The rules of etiquette are not so strict nowadays.如今的礼仪规则已不那么严格了。
• According to etiquette,you should stand up to meet a guest.按照礼节你应该站起来接待客人。

15 mentality   

n.心理，思想，脑力

参考例句：

• He has many years'experience of the criminal mentality.他研究犯罪心理有多年经验。
• Running a business requires a very different mentality from being a salaried employee.经营企业所要求具备的心态和上班族的心态截然不同。

16 assertive   

adj.果断的，自信的，有冲劲的

参考例句：

• She always speaks an assertive tone.她总是以果断的语气说话。
• China appears to have become more assertive in the waters off its coastline over recent years.在近些年，中国显示出对远方海洋的自信。

17 determined   

adj.坚定的；有决心的

参考例句：

• I have determined on going to Tibet after graduation.我已决定毕业后去西藏。
• He determined to view the rooms behind the office.他决定查看一下办公室后面的房间。

18 harmonious   

adj.和睦的，调和的，和谐的，协调的

参考例句：

• Their harmonious relationship resulted in part from their similar goals.他们关系融洽的部分原因是他们有着相似的目标。
• The room was painted in harmonious colors.房间油漆得色彩调和。