雅思考试作文部分一定要高分开头

 　　Events such as "the Protest of theCentury" which took placeinSeattle,USAin December 1999 have focused the world’sattention on global ‘free’ trade. The protest was against theWorld Trade Organization (WTO), in particular its role inpromoting world-wide free trade.（举例）In this essay, I wouldlike to take a critical look at the concept of free trade.（间接法）Is it a natural phenomenon? Are free market economiescommon in world history? Or is this a relatively¹ recent concept created by powerful nations andcompanies and imposed on the less powerful?（提问提出中间段落）

　　Polarization between the rural areas and urban communities is not a new topic at all to socialworkers or psychologists.（下定义提出背景）When things come to the case inChina, they aremore complicated and intricate owing to multilevel reasons and causes. Therefore, to narrow thediscrepancy between these two parts of the world seems even more challenging both to thegovernment and to the public.（直接法）

　　________. ________.（背景和过渡省略）As far as I am concerned, the government, forthe sake of its own image, the safety of the public, and the future of our next generation, is boundto be held responsible for the limitation and supervision² of the violence in TV programs and movieproducts.（直接法提出Thesis Statement）

　　_______. _________.（背景和过渡省略）Genetic engineering can, on the one handimprove the crop production, on the other, plant the seeds of future problems. (直接法提出TS)本文由在线英语听力室整理编辑。

1 relatively   

adv.比较...地，相对地

参考例句：

• The rabbit is a relatively recent introduction in Australia.兔子是相对较新引入澳大利亚的物种。
• The operation was relatively painless.手术相对来说不痛。

2 supervision   

n.监督，管理

参考例句：

• The work was done under my supervision.这项工作是在我的监督之下完成的。
• The old man's will was executed under the personal supervision of the lawyer.老人的遗嘱是在律师的亲自监督下执行的。