2013年1月10日雅思写作回忆

　　2013年1月10日雅思写作考试回忆

　　小作文：比较音乐时尚体育三种杂志几年间的销量，只有一张曲线图。

　　大作文：The most important thingof people's life is his or her work. Without satisfying career, the life is meaningless. To what extent¹ do you agree ordisagree?没有满意的工作人生就没意义这观点赞成否 ?

　　上海新东方许飞老师点评：

　　小作文-线图三种报刊杂志的销售情况，可参考剑桥B7P53页线图的描述方法;大作文-Work which is of great importance for a majority of people makes their life more meaningful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?抽象类话题。

　　线图最具代表性的莫过于剑桥B7P53，销量初始、最大、最小及销量相同等主要特征数据莫忘提及!趋势汇总必须有!大作文清晰的立场、合乎逻辑的supporting sentences以及论证方法的得体运用，样样不可少!当然词汇的sufficient及grammar的多样精准亦是获得高分必备!

　　上海新东方张弛新老师点评：

　　1.10雅思大作文基本回忆：It is said that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree ordisagree with the opinion?基本上属于马斯洛的大主题，建议部分同意(财富)，还有健康、艺术等可写。

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