托福综合写作的几种开头方法

　　“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker， not to government or to business.

　　As a saying goes， “God helps those help themselves”， which is true in most cases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological¹ and market changes are concerned， I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.

　　托福综合写作开头方法二、 可以适当的复述一下题目，然后稍作让步，再表达自己的观点和立场

　　“Work greatly influences people’s personal lives—their special interests， their leisure activities， even their appearance way from the work place.”

　　The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests， recreational activities and even appearance. While I agree that the personal lives of some people are largely determined² by their work， in my view it would be a mistake to draw this conclusion generally. In my observation， the extent to which occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work， and how central the work is to one’s sense of self.

　　“We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”

　　I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior³ shape of buildings， as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic⁴ elements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits， I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes， moods， and even life styles.

　　托福综合写作开头方法三、新托福写作可以以提问方式开头，阐述自己的观点，再表明自己的立场

　　“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker， not to government or to business.”

　　As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete⁵， who is responsible for helping⁶ displaced workers adjustWhile individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work， both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.

　　托福综合写作开头方法四、可以先表明自己的立场，再阐述原因

　　Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies， but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.

　　Contrary to the statement’s premise⁷， my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies， because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic⁸ inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.

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