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细究托福写作结尾段的构成元素

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 开头并结尾都是托福写作应重点琢磨的段落,也有一定制式可循。写作开头已经常探讨如何写作,这里来看看托福考试写作结尾段有那些构成要素呢?

  1. 再次陈述主题。用 paraphrase1 方式再次呈现主题陈述中出现的三要素: a.问题中存在争议的地方; b.观点;c.理由。
  2. 结束句。放在陈述完主题之后。
  托福写作辅导提出结尾段结束句的三种常见写法:
  一. 托福作文的最后总结教训或提出建议
  In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations2 to become successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed.
  二. 提出令人忧虑的结果或可能出现的负面结果
  假设读者没有想作者说的那样去做,在结论中提出将会出现的负面结果,帮助读者预见到令人忧虑的后果,进而令读者自然第接受作者的意见。
  e.g., To summarize, on one hand, for artists who are fortunate to profit immensely from their occupation, it is unnecessary for the government to offer additional financial incentives3 for them. On the other hand, government should provide financial support and appropriate policies to impoverished4 artists who engage in conventional craftsmanship5 because these are viewed as national treasure and cultural heritage of the country. If the government did not support those unfortunate traditional artists, the valuable conventional forms of arts would disappear very soon.
  三. 提出问题留待读者思考
  In conclusion, it is inevitable6 for children to commit mistakes at a young age, parents should play their part to instill the importance of good behaviors in their children. Parents should allow children to make small mistakes as a meaningful learning experience. However, what would be like if parents permit their children to commit serious mistakes like theft and robbery?
  结尾段常用表达方式:
  Finally, thus, in a word, in brief;
  In conclusion, to conclude, in the end;
  In the final analysis, in a nutshell, on the whole;
  To summarize, to encapsulate, in sum, in summary
  In light of these facts, considering these ideas

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1 paraphrase SLSxy     
vt.将…释义,改写;n.释义,意义
参考例句:
  • You may read the prose paraphrase of this poem.你可以看一下这首诗的散文释义。
  • Paraphrase the following sentences or parts of sentences using your own words.用你自己的话解释下面的句子或句子的一部分。
2 alterations c8302d4e0b3c212bc802c7294057f1cb     
n.改动( alteration的名词复数 );更改;变化;改变
参考例句:
  • Any alterations should be written in neatly to the left side. 改动部分应书写清晰,插在正文的左侧。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • Gene mutations are alterations in the DNA code. 基因突变是指DNA 密码的改变。 来自《简明英汉词典》
3 incentives 884481806a10ef3017726acf079e8fa7     
激励某人做某事的事物( incentive的名词复数 ); 刺激; 诱因; 动机
参考例句:
  • tax incentives to encourage savings 鼓励储蓄的税收措施
  • Furthermore, subsidies provide incentives only for investments in equipment. 更有甚者,提供津贴仅是为鼓励增添设备的投资。 来自英汉非文学 - 环境法 - 环境法
4 impoverished 1qnzcL     
adj.穷困的,无力的,用尽了的v.使(某人)贫穷( impoverish的过去式和过去分词 );使(某物)贫瘠或恶化
参考例句:
  • the impoverished areas of the city 这个城市的贫民区
  • They were impoverished by a prolonged spell of unemployment. 他们因长期失业而一贫如洗。 来自《简明英汉词典》
5 craftsmanship c2f81623cf1977dcc20aaa53644e0719     
n.手艺
参考例句:
  • The whole house is a monument to her craftsmanship. 那整座房子是她技艺的一座丰碑。
  • We admired the superb craftsmanship of the furniture. 我们很欣赏这个家具的一流工艺。
6 inevitable 5xcyq     
adj.不可避免的,必然发生的
参考例句:
  • Mary was wearing her inevitable large hat.玛丽戴着她总是戴的那顶大帽子。
  • The defeat had inevitable consequences for British policy.战败对英国政策不可避免地产生了影响。
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