高考英语第一轮复习：英语作文高分必杀技

 　　十句作文法是由有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高成绩。为此有必要向考生加以介绍，目的是使一些对作文没有把握的考生找到一条可行的解决办法。

　　需要指出的是所谓十句作文并非一定10句，从很多考生的高分（200词以下）来分析，句子数量在8句至12句（依句子长短和结构不同而不同）。如以每个句子平均10—15个单词计

　　算，便能用8—12个句子完成一篇要求120—150字的作文。

　　其基本模式为：

　　┌─主题句句1

　　第一段─┤

　　开头　   └─扩展句句2

　　┌─主题句句1

　　第二段─┤

　　正文　   ├─扩展句句2

　　├─扩展句句3

　　├─扩展句句4

　　├─扩展句句5

　　├─扩展句句6

　　├─扩展句句7

　　├─扩展句句8

　　└─扩展句句9

　　第三段──结尾句句10

　　结尾

　　第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，必须提出，通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，须进一步说明和支持主题句。或是将关系倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。

　　第二段为正文，共七句。第一句（句3）为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关和一致。第二句至第七句（句4一句7）为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。

　　第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句，它将前面内容总结为一结果，表明自己的论点。三段之间的连接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的连接过渡手段。例如：

　　Example 1

　　Television

　　Television presents a vivid world in front of us.（1）（主题句） Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. （2）（扩展句）

　　Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. （3）（主题句） For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. （4）（扩展句） For another, children can broaden¹ their scope² of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The Animal World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". （5）（扩展句） Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. （6）（扩展句） Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication³. （7）（扩展句） And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses. （8）（扩展句）In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. （9）（扩展句）

　　Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. （10）（总结句） （全文共165个词）

　　Example 2

　　Changes in People's Diet

　　There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. （1）（主题句）For example, grain, the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role, while the consumption⁴ of high-nutrition food such as milk, meat has increased. （2） （扩展句）

　　The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. （3） （主题句）First, people are much wealthier than before. （4） （扩展句） With a higher income, they can afford to buy good foods which, in the past, were rarely seen on the dinner tables of ordinary families. （5） （扩展句） Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. （6） （扩展句） Lack of certain amount of meat or milk, for example, will result in poor health. （7） （扩展句） Finally, owing to the economic reform, meat and milk, which were scarce in the past, are produced in large quantities. （8） （扩展句） For all those reasons, what was formerly⁵ called "the basket of vegetables" has become that of varied⁶ foods. （9） （扩展句）

　　To sum up, insignificant⁷ as those changes may seem, they are the signs of the improved economic condition in China, and we believe that as the effort in the modernization⁸ movement continues, there will be greater changes in people's diet in the future. （10） （总结句）

1 broaden   

v.放宽，变宽，扩大

参考例句：

• We broaden in experiences by traveling.旅行增长我们的经验。
• Let's broaden out the discussion to talk about education as a whole.我们来扩大一下讨论范围，全面谈谈教育问题。

2 scope   

n.（处理、研究事物的）范围，余地，机会

参考例句：

• There is limited scope for creativity in my job.我的工作中发挥创造力的空间有限。
• There is little scope for initiative in this job.这工作几乎没有发挥主动性的余地。

3 telecommunication   

n.电信，远距离通信

参考例句：

• Telecommunication is an industry of service.电信业是一个服务型的行业。
• I only care about the telecommunication quality and the charge.我只关心通信质量和资费两个方面。

4 consumption   

n.消费，消耗，消费额，消耗量，结核病

参考例句：

• Consumption of oil has declined in recent years.石油消耗量在最近几年下降了。
• The meat was condemned as unfit for human consumption.这种肉已被宣布不适宜人们食用。

5 formerly   

adv.从前，以前

参考例句：

• We now enjoy these comforts of which formerly we had only heard.我们现在享受到了过去只是听说过的那些舒适条件。
• This boat was formerly used on the rivers of China.这船从前航行在中国内河里。

6 varied   

adj.多样的，多变化的

参考例句：

• The forms of art are many and varied.艺术的形式是多种多样的。
• The hotel has a varied programme of nightly entertainment.宾馆有各种晚间娱乐活动。

7 insignificant   

adj.无关紧要的，可忽略的，无意义的

参考例句：

• In winter the effect was found to be insignificant.在冬季，这种作用是不明显的。
• This problem was insignificant compared to others she faced.这一问题与她面临的其他问题比较起来算不得什么。

8 modernization   

n.现代化，现代化的事物

参考例句：

• This will help us achieve modernization.这有助于我们实现现代化。
• The Chinese people are sure to realize the modernization of their country.中国人民必将实现国家现代化。